Describe a small and successful company you know.
You should say:
what is the company called
how did you know this company
what kind of business this company does
and explain why you think this company is successful.
Let me talk about a fitness club. It’s called Nirvana Fitness. It’s just next to my place. Last month, I felt really out of shape. So I went to this fitness club.
The club offered a variety of membership types with different rates to meet different needs. They also had a three-day guest pass for first timers. It turned out that this club was pretty cool. It had lots of good machines like the treadmills, exercise bikes and steppers. All the equipment was brand-new. This club also offered Pilates and yoga classes so the members could tone up without building up too many muscles.
Their trainers were also very helpful. When I first started working out there, my body hurt all over. But then I got used to the exercise and now I’m feeling pretty good. And sometimes I asked the trainers for some advice, they were real experts and showed me a lot of new exercises. And on top of that they also advised me on my diet and my fitness plan.
My one-year membership cost me 1,500 yuan, kind of pricey, right? But I’m sure I’ll get my money worth.
26/08/2015 at 19:54
“All the equipments were brand-new”, I think this sentence should be”all the equipment was brand new” cos equipment is an uncountable noun.